Please correct my essay :) ______________________________ If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests . I'll show two reasons. One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is (2024)

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Please correct my essay :) ______________________________ If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests . I'll show two reasons. One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is serious problem in the world. A rich nature such as forests supply us flesh Oxygen which is neccesary for our life and use CO2 which promote globalwarming. It is difficult to quickly increase forests by growing trees because trees need a lot of time to grow up. The other, forests can provide the space with children want to play outside. I think that these days children have few chance of playing in the nature. If children can play in the forests, thdy would have a good experiences and memories. For these reasons, I want to make the earth full with green. (2)

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If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests.
I'll provide two reasons.
One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is a serious problem in the world. A rich nature such as forests supply us with fresh oxygen which is neccesary for our life, and use CO2 which promote globalwarming.
It is difficult to quickly increase forests by growing trees because trees need a lot of time to grow.
The other forests can provide the space for children who want to play outside.
I think that these days children have few chances to play alongside nature.
If children can play in the forests, they would have good experiences and memories.
For these reasons, I want to make the earth full with green.

Please correct my essay :) ______________________________ If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests . I'll show two reasons. One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is serious problem in the world. A rich nature such as forests supply us flesh Oxygen which is neccesary for our life and use CO2 which promote globalwarming. It is difficult to quickly increase forests by growing trees because trees need a lot of time to grow up. The other, forests can provide the space with children want to play outside. I think that these days children have few chance of playing in the nature. If children can play in the forests, thdy would have a good experiences and memories. For these reasons, I want to make the earth full with green. (4)

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Please correct my essay :) ______________________________ If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests . I'll show two reasons. One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is serious problem in the world. A rich nature such as forests supply us flesh Oxygen which is neccesary for our life and use CO2 which promote globalwarming. It is difficult to quickly increase forests by growing trees because trees need a lot of time to grow up. The other, forests can provide the space with children want to play outside. I think that these days children have few chance of playing in the nature. If children can play in the forests, thdy would have a good experiences and memories. For these reasons, I want to make the earth full with green. (12)

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Please correct my essay :) ______________________________ If I could change something in the world, I would like to increase forests . I'll show two reasons. One, they prevent the earth from warming by globalwarming. It is often said that globalwarming is serious problem in the world. A rich nature such as forests supply us flesh Oxygen which is neccesary for our life and use CO2 which promote globalwarming. It is difficult to quickly increase forests by growing trees because trees need a lot of time to grow up. The other, forests can provide the space with children want to play outside. I think that these days children have few chance of playing in the nature. If children can play in the forests, thdy would have a good experiences and memories. For these reasons, I want to make the earth full with green. (14)

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